Look at me....
do you think i am scared?
do you think my spirits are dead?
do you think you will afflict me with your presence?
Once....
I did love you.
once....
I did long for you
I felt your touch was solacing
But now I want to break free.... for myself!
It was only when I looked inside your eyes
dessembling and yet enchanting...
you smiled at my impuissance.
i realised ... I wasn't losing anything
It was all just a phoney fiction.
I cant live the dream anymore.
for you were just a dream .... surreal!
you cannot mollify me any further
you are unreal.... just my imagination.
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I am glad you visited my blog, dear Darkness. Thans for liking my poem. Do keep visiting.
And, falling in love is so hard on th eknees, ain't it? Lovely poem.
thats true... thanks
:)
Surprising how I saw traces of myself scattered in bits and pieces of your words.
Surprising, I've written that!
Nice to have dropped by here...and read your last few posts.
Oh and all te best for exams!
Impuissance -- nice choice of word!
The toughest part of leaving behind someone/something, is telling yourself that whatever existed was not what it seemed. And yes, the memories wreck havoc, but that's later on.
Nice blog you have here, the archives made for interesting reading. Will be back for more.
Thanks for dropping by my blog and commenting. And yes, good luck with the exams -- exams and blogging don't go well together, do they?
thanks both of you.
keep reading more.
I should be studying but..........
this blogging thing has become a habit now.
can't do without it.
:D
Once....
I did love you.
once....
I did long for you
Ohhh...here we go again...I'm so ova this term called L-O-V-E...people are so misusing it these days...and I hate them...
I cant live the dream anymore.
for you were just a dream .... surreal!
good that you realised it...before it was too late...
Thanks for dropping by ma blog...
Nice poem...
Greetz!!!
good one
Thanx for visiting my blog :-)
Nice of you to drop by...
Nice piece. :)
Thank you !!!!
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